I used powerpoint to create two slides that show the main areas in which we were instructed to improve on. The hook and sound, I have included the before and after to convey how we have taken advice given to our group and improved our film audience in order to make it more appealing to our target audience and flow as a smooth opening.
Reflective post with evidence of changes and edits made after feedback, resulting in improved audience engagement and creation of suspense. The addition of the phone call certainly leaves the audience with the impression that the husband's threats are life-threatening.
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